Monday, 13 October 2008
Waiwera hot pools!!!!
When my mum picked me up from my friends house to go to Waiwera it was so cool. I went on the little kids slide with the water fall and we went to the big yellow and blue slide. One of the side was'nt deep but the pool was so deep I got out of the pool, stood on the side and jumped off landing in the water!
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good story i liked the colours to...
but put a bit more detail on to it.
B.S
P.S this is my story
Great story maybe next time you can have a bit more detail.
B.B
thanks guys for the comments BFFFFL
Wow that must have been pretty cool I bet you had fun. Did you go on any other slides ???
Hey BFFL that was a great story we really liked the part were you said big yellow and blue slide. HOPE YOU HAD FUN AT WAIWERA.
by B.B AND L.R
Nice story I liked how you.......
Got to the point and wasnt to wordy Why did you go on the kiddys slide
A.G.E.B
:):):):):):):)
dear B.S
that must of been really fun to go to the hot pools i hope i can go again.
i like how you.....
told the colours of the slide to explain how fast it was.
questions.....
why did you go on the slow slide first and then the fast?
hey thats sounds like alot of fun hope I can go there someday
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